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A REVIEW ON MYSELF


TITLE : A REVIEW ON MYSELF 

 I wasn't able to study law 
Which allows me not to judge my flaw (s) 
I accepted it as what life has drawn 
I'm moving in a pace so as not to step on a claw.

 One faithful day, I stare at myself 
Through the mirror, then I asked the mirror 
What are you capable of doing for yourself? 
Then I said nothing, maybe it's an error. 

 This is why I'm making a review 
A guy like me has always crave for a perfect love 
If not everyone knows, but few 
Knows it's a great pathology I'm unable to solve. 

 They will say to me, Ibbwrites 
With the way you write in great plights 
You ought to have one, if not perfect 
A lass that is not far off, and will never defect. 

 Thank God for making me who I'm 
I'm not like a falling water in the dam 
I'm growing everyday, can't you see my farm? 
I'm confident always, and feel so calm. 

 I'm always afraid to words loosing off 
Cos thy thinking has gone beyond day cloth 
The night is not for me to sleep off 
That's why I'm always with my pen, my forth. 

 Though, I do sleep with a lantern 
But, I'm a wake up writer 
I don't joke with words coming quicker 
The pen is my muse, it writes faster. 

 Finally, I need to acknowledge 
The Magnified God, for the little knowledge 
I'm grateful for Him not making me an avarice 
Success is the interpretation of my life, I'll surely rise. 

 Ibbwrites ©
2018

Comments

  1. RANI MEDIA11 August 2018 at 16:20

    Good one brother.
    Keep it up. May Allah continue to increase you in knowledge and wisdom to do more of this.

    I will recommend you should create a Facebook page, of possible group too and also whatsapp group.
    With that, you will change a life with your work and also a lot of ppl will benefit from it. God bless you.

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  2. Unknown11 August 2018 at 16:56

    Pretty lines.. Keep it up.. ".cant yu see my farms?"
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  3. Unknown12 August 2018 at 03:25

    Alhamdulilah for everything until now , u definitely are gifted , I can tell from my assignment dat u completed flawlessly 🕺..., Move at ur own pace bruh
    And do not worry , focus on the present Nd the perfect love will turn up dats sure ..... As I said before in a while make it accessible to other writers , dat will build up the blog , expose you more and give other writers the exposure they need too...

    Always on ur side bruh #mbk4real

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  4. Unknown12 August 2018 at 03:27

    Thumbs up bro,keep it up may Almighty Allah continue to increase your knowledge and grant you more wisdom and understanding

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    1. Ibbwrites12 August 2018 at 03:41

      Your name please. And which network ?

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    2. Unknown12 August 2018 at 04:59

      Omotayo khadijat
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    3. Unknown12 August 2018 at 04:59

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  7. Anonymous12 August 2018 at 03:59

    Am happy seeing you with this, great idea man! Never relent and Keep your head up bro...#the #voice #of #the #voiceless ��
    The sky isn’t your own limit...Am happy having a poet and a motivational writer by side...I don’t need Wole shoyinka again! I got one....#ShittuNahGod

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  8. Unknown12 August 2018 at 04:09

    This is awesome , such a great blog , I guess I can pass time by reading each and every article .. nice one brother , greater heights
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  9. Unknown12 August 2018 at 09:47

    Ege 💰......nice one mate.... higher I pray thee

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  10. Unknown18 November 2018 at 05:22

    Happy birthday 🎊 to u brother. Mbk4real shared ur link on his WhatsApp story nd I had to click.

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  11. Unknown22 November 2018 at 23:34

    Fine poet, beautiful poem.

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