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SOLO CUM VIDE


TITLE: SOLO CUM VIDE

 How do you feel? 
When you give up someone indispensable 
A place where no one can fill
Not even a glass of water on my table.

 The solo cum vide 
Is just a brief of how we divide (d) 
When she was still by my side 
She was nothing but my guide. 

 We had good memories together 
Cos she came when I needed her the most 
I saw her and I make up a toast 
But now,  she made me surrender. 

 Just her presence alone 
Makes me breathing like a clone 
But when we departs 
She totally forget our past.

 Does she have the real feelings for me? 
Cos when we're a little bit distance (d) 
She got away with another me
Which I can't stand in a glance. 

 Our love life went diminish (ed) 
She cared no more about my worry (ies)
My life was like a frozen fish 
I had to cook 'em with some curry (ies) 

 One day in my garden. 
I went for a relax in our hut 
Then I realised how I've been so hurt 
By you leaving me for another, all of a sudden. 

 I sat staring at the chair 
Once filled by you dear
But you took me for a share 
Surely someday, I'll get a new care 
From someone, reviving me from my fear (s).

 Ibbwrites©
2018

Comments

  1. Unknown12 August 2018 at 03:32

    It's no news that this is my favourite (😂🤣😂😂😂) ,solo cum vide , it'll all be alright sooner or later iyen sure ...we Gon find the one for us Nd be fulfilled.
    Wish we dint have to go through hurt and pain before finding true love, anyways we hold on to the memories of the good times with the love we thought would last forever, Nd keep the hope alive.
    #mbk4real

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  2. Unknown12 August 2018 at 03:33

    And yeah , this piece was inspired by me 😔😔😔

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